Reader, they married. What if Jane Eyre were a series?

What if Jane Eyre were a series? Would we like to hang out with the Rochesters as a married couple?

Full disclosure:  I’m not actually going to talk about Mr. & Mrs. Rochester all that much. It’s not a series and Charlotte Bronte didn’t write a “Thornfield Book 2.” So if you are offended by a mild Bait & Switch approach, let me offer my apologies. But there’s another Bronte-esque, moody married couple I have been spending time with lately, and it’s got me thinking…

Back in May I posted about my intoxication with the gothic, Eyre-ish romance of Lady Julia Grey and the maddening, enigmatic Nicholas Brisbane. I’d just finished Book the First in Deanna Raybourn’s Silent trilogy, and it provoked me to indulge in a near-orgy of adulation for this couple as a re-invented post-feminist, mystery-hunting version of the challenging, unequal, yet deeply satisfying romance between Jane and Rochester.

In August, I gobbled up three more tales about Brisbane and Julia, and I’ve been thinking a lot about what makes these novels work as romances. They’re not published as such but the marketing – especially the original paperback editions (US only? I’m not sure.) – suggests the romance genre and I think they enjoy a wide popularity with romance readers, in addition to the nebulous “women’s fiction” readership and/or lovers of romantic historical fiction.

Having just finished the fourth novel, I am currently visiting with the Brisbanes as newlyweds. They are enjoying what would in a traditional romance be their well-deserved HEA. They’ve had an extended honeymoon across Europe, solved a mystery in India, and are preparing to make their home in England together.

A quick recap: Silent in the Grave (2007) introduced Julia and Nicholas over the dead body of her husband. Secrets emerge, the murder is solved, they get in each other’s way a lot, conversations smolder. Destiny is foretold; gratification delayed. It’s achingly romantic, and I loved it.

In Silent in the Sanctuary (2008), they meet for the first time after a year’s separation when Julia’s father throws them together at a large house party where a murder occurs and everyone is trapped by a heavy snowfall. A classic whodunit-at-a-house-party story. What ensues is a reluctant courtship of sorts, with other potential lovers aplenty and Brisbane nursing — in his inimitably enigmatic way —  all the carefully constructed reasons he ought not to act on his obviously intense attraction and deep emotional connection to Julia. This is Brisbane at his most maddeningly remote.

Silent on the Moor (Lady Julia, #3)With the third novel, we reach the most Bronte-esque of settings when Julia tracks Brisbane to his neglected Yorkshire estate, complete with colorful household staff, a windswpet moor, and a madwoman. Silent on the Moor (2009) is the story — at last — of this couple’s reconciliation and acceptance of their feelings for one another. At last they marry. But Raybourn infuses the conclusion of the Yorkshire book with sufficient uncertainty to leave plenty of room for further romantic tension and conflict in subsequent novels.

Dark Road to Darjeeling (Lady Julia, #4)And of course, this is precisely what we get with the next book, the start of a new, “Dark” trilogy: Dark Road to Darjeeling (2010). I still love this couple, and I’m willing to follow them down at least a few more dark roads.  But I found myself falling out of the story more often as I read, and looking harder at whether it still reads like a romance.

The series is ineffably clever and Raybourn sustained the buildup of romantic tension so well over the first 3 books.  At the same time each novel has its own narrative arc that tracks with many romance conventions.  These include a sudden and/or unexpected meeting, mutual attraction  and romantic entanglement, a dangerous situation, fear for the loved one’s safety, deception of the beloved (often motivated by protective urges), confrontation, betrayal, rejection, reunion, and ultimately a satisfying yet tantalizing expression of love and dedication. The first two such expressions are somewhat oblique, but potently symbolic. While they certainly don’t constitute a traditional HEA, they are enough to scratch the romance-reading itch that demands some kind of declaration by the hero which is accepted by the heroine. In short, although not romance novels, I found I experienced each book in the Silent series as a self-contained “romance read,” and I rejoiced for Julia and her smoldering Gypsy-blueblood husband, when matrimony was finally achieved at the end of the first trilogy.

Dark Road to Darjeeling opens with marital bliss but quickly tears the Brisbanes apart as they receive information about a possible murder and revert to their pre-nuptial behavior of attempting to manipulate each other and exert control over an investigation in which they each have a particular interest. Julia begins a deliberate campaign to prove her worth as an investigator and withholds so much information that the two are at arms length emotionally even when they are physically reunited about halfway into the book. For me, the first inkling that this book was going to be a different sort of read was the fact that early on I became completely annoyed with Julia’s passive aggressive behavior. She’s too often on the verge of sharing useful information with Brisbane, only to withhold it in order to try and do him one better, and it just comes across as spiteful. But was her behavior different from the previous books, or am I holding her accountable differently because he’s her husband now?

To put it another way, is Julia written differently as a wife character, or am I reading her differently as a wife character? Intrepid and strong-minded, or foolhardy and shrewish? Brisbane as a husband strikes me as about the same combination of stubborn inscrutability, ruthless possessiveness and hidden vulnerability, as he did when he was loving Julia from afar — it does come across differently near the end of the book, but a bit more about that anon.

These questions also remind me that there are very successful romance novels where the H/h are married to each other from start to finish (I’m thinking right now of several wonderful historicals by Sherry Thomas, including Not Quite a Husband and Private Arrangements, but there are also contemporary examples such as Ruthie Knox’s recent novella, Making It Last, which is – interestingly – part of a series). So I don’t think what I’m puzzling over is the question of a married romance vs. a romance that ends with marriage. It’s more about the idea of a series — told over the course of multiple books — that follows a couple over the relationship lifespan – how does that work within the romance conventions, or does it? Can I keep coming back to the same couple, even if I do find them quite intoxicating, and receive the same novel-reading pleasure that takes me on an emotional journey to an HEA (or some kind of stand-in for the HEA) — or will it at some point start to wear?

On the up side – with Julia’s married POV, readers can look forward to elegantly circumspect yet deliciously pointed conversations alluding to Brisbane’s …er, appetites, and the sexual and emotional intimacies of the marriage bed. This kind of thing, along with domestic interactions (he takes lots of baths) and discoveries, deepens the emotional impact of their exchanges and their manipulations. Yet the constant push/pull between them started to wear on me somewhere along about the third or fourth time they played out their cycle of intrigue, deception, discovery, confrontation, rupture, confession, reunion…more intrigue…

But this novel can also be read as a portrait of a marriage in the making.  It’s a very young and fragile marriage between two quite mature and willful individuals. Yes, I grew (quite) weary of Julia’s endless attempts to circumvent Brisbane and her self-righteous and unbecoming piques when the shoe is on the other foot and he out-maneuvers her. By the same token, Brisbane’s high-handedness almost started to seem manufactured or arbitrary, a necessary dramatic element to further their romantic tension. Without stepping into spoiler territory, I must say that I found the test he sets Julia at the end of the book held a slight hint of D/s which seemed to come out of nowhere.

But perhaps what makes the book succeed as a romance is that it asserts marriage itself as a series of these narrative arcs. There are absences and chance encounters, intrigues and partnerships, withholding and separations, confrontations and communions, ruptures and renewals. And these cycles can occur more than once in a couple’s journey. I’m pretty sure most people would agree this is true in real life — the question is, do we want to read about these exhilarating (or exhausting, depending on your point of view and/or what’s happening in your personal life) roller coasters when it’s a fictional couple we hold dear?

Leaving aside the issue that they might not have a new mystery to solve every 6 months or so, would we want to read more books chronicling how Jane and Rochester fared?  I think I probably would find them irresistible, and they’d certainly be commercially viable, but Charlotte B may not have wanted to write them.

This may be one of the important ways Brisbane and Julia are NOT like Rochester and Jane – the mysteries provide the opportunity and the means for new chapters of their married story, and their ongoing battle of wills provides the motive to keep reading – and writing – them as romances.

2006 film adaptation of Jane Eyre, an apocryphal final scene

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The Lady Julia Gray series is published by the MIRA imprint of Harlequin. I purchased copies of these first four books at my local used paperback shop. I’m hoping they may have a copy of #5 – The Dark Enquiry when I stop in there this week. If not, it’s going in my Amazon cart, because I’m definitely along for the ride with the Brisbanes, in spite of my quibbles.

10 thoughts on “Reader, they married. What if Jane Eyre were a series?

  1. Miss Bates says:

    Miss Bates read all these books too … well, she, unlike you, did not finish DARK ROAD TO DARJEELING and had an even stronger aversion to Julia, and annoyance towards Nicholas. The favourite remains SILENT ON THE MOOR, maybe because as a closed-room mystery, it gave a lot more room for the romance to develop and achieve a most satifying HEA, which was Miss Bates’s clutch-to-chest fun with Julia-and-Nicholas. Since then, Miss Bates has thought about these books a lot and why she doesn’t care to return to the series.

    I think it has to do with Julia and Nicholas, as you pointed out, reverting to their original antagonism and rivalry. I would have liked to have seen some growth and maturity from them. I also think that it would … ahem … have helped if that darn bedroom door had opened. It might have allayed the sameness of their interactions by giving the reader “access” to an arena that we hadn’t glimpsed in the previous books.

    It’s interesting that you made note of Knox’s novella, which Miss Bates liked A LOT, though not as much as her first two books. Knox’s story centres so thoroughly on Tony and Amber that there’s no room for anything else … a romance is rekindled and the interactions, physical and emotional, that have grown stale are renewed. Maybe if I’d finished DARJEELING, I might have had that sense? I think not … because so much that is worked out in Knox’s novella lies in (sorry about all the punning; it a compulsion) her central symbol: the marriage-bed, not just as a place to share physical love (Miss Bates is trying to be delicate here, but is doing a mild blush as she types), but to work out the kinks of the relationship in a place of emotional intimacy, whispered confessions/avowals, and the cave-like, atavistic creature comfort of shared sleep. Do we ever have a scene like that in the Raybourn books? Not. However, Miss Bates is judging them here on their “romance” scale and finding it wanting, which, in a way, is not fair as they were not written as such. Nevertheless, that’s how I read them … and why I left them behind.

    As for my/our beloved JANE … it is always a delight to see how much the genre owes her/Brontë. Thank you for making that connection for me: I hadn’t seen it then and wouldn’t have till now! 🙂

    • pamela1740 says:

      As Miss Bates is aware, I generally don’t read much contemporary romance, but given her recommendation, I think I am going to have to give MAKING IT WORK a try! I was aware of the buzz around this as a romance novel(la) about an “old married couple” so I wanted to tie it in to this discussion thematically, but I haven’t actually read it. I probably should have disclosed that, and I’m grateful to Miss Bates for her lovely comparison of Tony and Amber’s story with that of Julia and Nicholas.

      Also, I realized today that I could have re-cast some of my discussion around the concept of multiple HFNs (Happy For Now) rather than HEAs, and it probably would have made more sense for the Brisbanes. But whether we call it HEA or HFN, in these books the endings provide the requisite emotional satisfaction of love declared (in one way or another). The challenging thing is that these declarations are also quite oblique and the satisfaction is all but snatched away leaving us to pick up the story again in the next book. After this fourth installment, I am feeling like REALLY I need them to move beyond the Anything You Can Do (I Can Do Better) one-upmanship!
      I keep picturing them singing that song from Annie Get Your Gun and hollering at each other. Which is kind of fun(ny) to think about, actually.

      • Miss Bates says:

        Miss Bates is a little nervous when she recommends something, but she hopes you like the Knox novella. Knox’s best is ABOUT LAST NIGHT because of the rugby-playing yummy British hero, but it’ll definitely be interesting to read what you think of Tony and Amber … 🙂

  2. willaful says:

    Great article! I generally find these types of series get wearing — even Eve and Roarke have palled on me — but I think your point about marriage creating a new narrative arc is a valid one. I actually reviewed a book recently in which I said something kind of similar and damned if I can find it now. :-\ Something about how the ups and downs bothered me less than usual because they reflected the reality of a new marriage. At some point though — generally about book three — I just get bored with it.

    • pamela1740 says:

      Thanks for reminding me about Eve and Roarke! I haven’t read any of the In Death series, but this is a great parallel and I’ve seen plenty of discussion about them as a romance “supercouple.” In revisiting a couple book after book (married or not, really — what’s interesting for me is the use of romance-novel conventions but for the same couple over and over again through a series of books) I think it’s definitely very tricky to walk the fine line of delivering enough romantic tension to fuel the narrative arc of the emotional/romance journey while also letting the relationship evolve and mature. How to keep the spark while giving them the Ever After domesticity of the HEA? We could be talking about marriage itself, and not just romance novels about marriage.

      Like Miss Bates, I did feel that in DARK ROAD, Julia and Nicholas regressed to antagonism and rivalry, which was tiresome. But perhaps I am willing to forgive their newlywed squabbles and hope for better in the next book.

  3. Miss Bates says:

    Oh gosh, Miss Bates loved the first In Death book, NAKED, wasn’t it? and loved Roarke and Eve. She listened to it, which is as rare for her as contemporary romance is for Pamela! Her favourite romance in a mystery series has to be Police Chief Russ and Reverend Clare in Julia Spencer-Fleming’s Millers Kill series. Unlike Nicholas and Julia, they’re just so grown-up, so mature, so considerate of each other, gentle. They understand the moral implications of their actions and there’s no rivalry, no antagonism, but co-operation, friendship, and a common cause. The ethos of this couple is, to Miss Bates’s sensibility at least, much preferable to Nicholas/Julia. But Nicholas/Julia are still intriguing, especially Nicholas!

  4. willaful says:

    I just finished a review that reminded me of this post. It was of the third in Cara McKenna’s “Curio” series,and it struck me that it’s progressing — I think, I *hope* — from an HFN to an HEA. Kind of a different way to do a series — though I suppose the trilogies that have become so popular are changing the way the genre works in this regard. Still, I think those mainly have cliffhanger endings, not HFN endings?

    • pamela1740 says:

      I don’t know this series, but I think it must be hard to strike a satisfying balance with a cliffhanger “what happens next” kind of ending with giving the H/h enough of an HFN to make it read like a romance. I admire authors who are pulling this off because I rather like being able to read more about favorite couples…

      • willaful says:

        I don’t know if you read erotic romance but it’s really a lovely series. The first book ends with an effective HFN, but I’m happy to see it moving towards an HEA. (If it doesn’t, I’ll be sad, though I suspect the author can pull it off so I won’t hate her.) I think my review of Curio is still up at GR and I reposted it on my blog if you want to check it out.

      • pamela1740 says:

        I’m more than a little intrigued. Thanks for the rec, and your lovely review here:


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